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Thursday 13 August 2015

Ice cream

                                                                  Ice cream
I think that children should be allowed to eat ice cream whenever they want to because it has different flavours and and its yummy and delicious.

Children should be allowed to eat ice cream because it has different flavours like strawberry, mango, nuts and chocolate that are healthy and good for our body. The milk in the ice cream can help our bones and teeth to be strong.

Children should not be allowed to eat ice cream whenever they want to ,because it has lots of sugar and it can make us hyperactive and can make us very sick because it can give is diabetes. 

I think children should be allowed ice cream on special celebrations or as a treat.

Wednesday 5 August 2015

How could adults be better

                    How could adults be better
I believe that adults could be better if they listen to their children's problems.

Adults should stop shouting at children when they made mistakes. They can put children on time out instead.

Adults should not drink too much alcohol, because the children might copy them when they grow up.
Adults should stop swearing because they might swear at their wife or children and they will get scared and sad .

The most important of all, is adults should not smack children because the government might take the children away from their parents.

L.I we are learning to write a persuasive writing.