How could adults be better

                    How could adults be better
I believe that adults could be better if they listen to their children's problems.

Adults should stop shouting at children when they made mistakes. They can put children on time out instead.

Adults should not drink too much alcohol, because the children might copy them when they grow up.
Adults should stop swearing because they might swear at their wife or children and they will get scared and sad .

The most important of all, is adults should not smack children because the government might take the children away from their parents.

L.I we are learning to write a persuasive writing.