Thursday, 4 June 2015
My trip to the beach
My trip to the beach
On Saturday me and my family went to the beach. The first
thing we did was unpack our stuff before we swim. After that
we went for a swim. My dad was swimming like a fish.
Next, we built a sandcastle and we put some shells
in it. Second we put our umbrella up because we were hot. We put
some sun cream on. Finally we packed our stuff then we
went home.
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Kyle, I like the way that you have used a lot of descriptive language, it reminds me of some of my own writing. Do you like going to the beach?
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