Hi Kyle I really like how you told people who the author and characters are in this story. I also really like how you put what the plot is in this story. Next time maybe you could say what your favourite part of the story is. I really enjoyed reading this I will recommend it to some of my little cousins. Keep posting amazing work like this Kyle :)
Hi Kyle
ReplyDeleteI really like how you told people who the author and characters are in this story. I also really like how you put what the plot is in this story. Next time maybe you could say what your favourite part of the story is. I really enjoyed reading this I will recommend it to some of my little cousins. Keep posting amazing work like this Kyle :)
your faithfully
Nicole