I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick’s School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mr Bell.
Kia ora Kyle. This is Katelin from Grey Main School. Wow this is amazing you have got a lot of ideas about this topic. I like how you have added lots of ideas about each of the main words. Next time you might want to add some more photos and make the words a bit bigger so that it is easier to read. Anyway this DLO is really cool!From Katelin
Kia Ora Kyle my name is Alex from Grey Main school. Great work on your off the edge initial ideas but next time you need to make it smaller because it is off the page. Great work. Alex.
Kia Ora Kyle,My name is Madisyn from Grey Main school,I like how you have Lots of infermashion about Initial Ideas-off the edge.Next time you could make the words alot bigger and bolder next timeFrom Madisyn
Kia ora Kyle. This is Katelin from Grey Main School.
ReplyDeleteWow this is amazing you have got a lot of ideas about this topic. I like how you have added lots of ideas about each of the main words.
Next time you might want to add some more photos and make the words a bit bigger so that it is easier to read.
Anyway this DLO is really cool!
From Katelin
Kia Ora Kyle my name is Alex from Grey Main school. Great work on your off the edge initial ideas but next time you need to make it smaller because it is off the page. Great work. Alex.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kyle,My name is Madisyn from Grey Main school,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have Lots of infermashion about Initial Ideas-off the edge.
Next time you could make the words alot bigger and bolder next time
From Madisyn